![]() ![]() "She's Lauren," I can't help but whisper. Also, the constant back and forth between 20 was terribly annoying and impaired the flow of the story. Save me from such an unbelievable and cheesy drama fest. Unfortunately this story has been inundated with angry outbursts at their worst, shouting matches, and tears ad nauseam. ![]() ![]() 'Oh, I still love him,' blah blah blah…'But I don't know him.' *pets* Lauren of 2008 acts like a shy, awkward, and embarrassing little girl and Lauren of 2011 is a whiny bitch who throws temper tantrums, screams her head off, growls, and acts like a dumb twat and will be gladly appeased with sex. She was never able to pull off a decent conversation and got on. The imbecile of a heroine was bathing in idiotic hissy fits and communicated through pleading, mumbling, crying, anger, sarcasm, and screaming. If I Break is a redundant story that features unlikable characters, really poor writing and über shoddy editing to the point where I felt appalled that something so incredibly bad has seen the light of day in the first place. I couldn't resist the little pun…you'll know what I mean after you've read my review. ![]()
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